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a satisfied tear ...

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Cold breeze whispers hollow promises
Caressing my face
The sun behind great mountains
Is turning away

I take a hurried look back
Still dazzle my eyes
Tears merge with the fog
Were lost in all those fights

Farewell ...

I sense the silence of these void
Taste of hopeless tumbling
Into a world of pleasant nothingness
Without hate and hugging

I devote myself to bleak place
I am waiting to watch
Learn how to become numb
All these feelings will see off

Farewell ...

Little drops of water and salt
I strongly hoped it would be rain
Encountering my skin and I woke
But these eyes are crying again

I detest this weakness!
But I still am
And love these feelings
I should already end

Farewell ...

So I wipe out this name
Wishes and dreams
Wipe it out like a stain
As I'll never achieve

Defenceless floating away
All memories were left behind
Satisfied with this hollow chest
and it seems I've lost my mind

... farewell



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Special thanks again to dazzle-stock for this beautiful picture i've needed to create my visual poem ...
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DimagerDesign's avatar
:rose: Beautiful concept - thought awoking - breathe taking ... One is left empty by the sadness, but yet -touched.